27 September 2009

This was an activity Vedic did for his first day of the 2nd grade. This activity was assigned by the school teacher to all the kids in which they have to cut and decorate the man and write few lines about them self.

“I like to play with Legos most. Mostly all play time I play with the legos. After one week I do Bee Star. Every day for study I do facterters and fact famileys. One week I went to my freands house. my mom works at Macys and my dad works at collgc.”

While typing I realized that he wrote my dad work at collgc. I kept it as it is including his spelling mistake.

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  1. opening sentences and title have much more valuable function than just entering words, they set the tone of the whole storytelling.
    And for different essay types required different tones and this is the whole theory that cannot be described in a few words.

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